This is the formative feedback from my tutor following my tutorial on Assignment 1:
The feedback is positive and encouraging. There are two main points to consider:
- Going forward, I should be pitching my work as a photographer, not as a student. The artist’s statement I wrote frames my body of work as part of a BA, but at this stage I need to forget about that context and try to promote my work on its own merits.
- Although this assignment included a draft publication plan based on production of a book from scratch, I should not ignore the work I have already done on producing a book.