Assignment 4 – tutor feedback

This is the feedback from my tutor on Assignment 4:

The main change to my work at this stage is the introduction of translucent overlays on which the text is printed. My tutor agrees that this better integrates the text with the images, so that confirms my way forward.

The most significant feedback point was that I should not be underselling the book compared to a potential exhibition – both are valid outcomes in their own right. From now on I will concentrate on the book and leave consideration of an exhibition until after I have finished my degree. I am happier now that I have found a way to get the book in front of a larger audience – my concern was how I would get an audience for a single book. My plan for smaller, more affordable copies of the book should help me achieve this aim.

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